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Old 13-05-07
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Default Fluctuating Faith

My faith fluctuates as the waves of the ocean
My Faith vacillates as the thoughts in motion
My Heart Bleeds droplets of my own faith
Lost in the essence of Confusion
Life...I can not bare
Oh Nearest Friend, Admit me into Your Blessed Prescence
As I live...Tears hunt me down infinitely...as if they are trapped.
As I Breathe ...Tears take away my breath.
As I Smile...the weight of tears turn it down.
As I think...tears wash them all away.
As I love...the sharp tears rip open my heart.
As I leave...it becomes the footsteps of my past...and the direction to my...future....
-Zahra-
***I Know its not perfect poetry, but when faith fluctuates, the Heart fails to inspire you with the Words and Mercy of God.***
--Pray for me, please.
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Default Re: Fluctuating Faith

Beautiful..
loved it..

in my opinion poetry doesn't have to rhyme, you just need to let go of your emotions and our whatever you are feeling on paper, be it rhymed or not..

keep it up
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thanks sis, rhyming poetry is my favorite and i love writing it, but i guess i can express myself more distinctly with these words.
God bless u, and thank you for your reply.
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Saaalaaam ,,

Gr8 poem again ,,

MashAllah ur creative ,, hope ya gd future,,

I liked ur special words,, keep it up dear,,

may Allah bless u & all Muslims Amin
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Assalamu alaikum wa RahmatuAllahe wa Barakatuhu

As I read your poem, it was as if my own personal thoughts and emotions were on the screen. Especially when I read the first and fourth lines.

You will be in my prayers Zahra.

Wassalam, Sofia.
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WOW! Zahra this poem's soooo touching! Its beautiful! Kinda reflects how almost all muslims feel
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