Never give up

[Muslima99]

Never give up


In the lowest low
When friends become foe
When your heart becomes alone
No calls on your phone

when you try and always lose
And you struggle but cannot choose
To give up or countinue your strive
To accomplish your goal in life

Remember your dream never fall
Back it up and stay tall
Never give up your hope decision
Always aside your vision

Live your dream
At the end it shall gleam
Things to you never seem
shall at the end seem

by Muslima99

[nami]

SubhanAllah!!ur poem reeli touched my heart sis,as myslf living in a dream n as u said

Live your dream
At the end it shall gleam
Things to you never seem
shall at the end seem

Aameen!!I m a person who neva gv up.if nt now i may get tatt frm my Rabb at d end.MashaAllah ur poem s beautiful as u!!
keep goin sis,may Allah SWT bless u alwez,Amin.

[Dittah]

Originally Posted by Muslima99

Never give up

In the lowest low
When friends become foe
When your heart becomes alone
No calls on your phone

when you try and always lose
And you struggle but cannot choose
To give up or countinue your strive
To accomplish your goal in life

Remember your dream never fall
Back it up and stay tall
Never give up your hope decision
Always aside your vision

Live your dream
At the end it shall gleam
Things to you never seem
shall at the end seem

by Muslima99

really wonderfull mashaAllah dear....
greatt work ...
keep it up...

[huma gillani]

MASHALLAH sis,

its awesome

thanks fo sharing

take care

[Some One]

Salam !
Its nice my friend,
and one should never give up That should be
the spirit.
thanks,
Some One

[flower of beauty]

Very nice sis
God bless u
wasslaam

[Ruru Radia]

thanks sister for the poem it's very beautiful!!!!

[the queen]

thanks sister for the poem it's very beautiful

[Truthseeker]

Originally Posted by Muslima99

Never give up


In the lowest low
When friends become foe
When your heart becomes alone
No calls on your phone

when you try and always lose
And you struggle but cannot choose
To give up or countinue your strive
To accomplish your goal in life

Remember your dream never fall
Back it up and stay tall
Never give up your hope decision
Always aside your vision

Live your dream
At the end it shall gleam
Things to you never seem
shall at the end seem

by Muslima99

Dear Moslima,

It brought back nostalgic memories of a time when I wrote a poem more or less with a similar wording & idea. I will share that with you some time soon if I could recall that. For now your poem has enlivened me up & thrown my conscious on a streak of endless memories. Beautiful idea captured through equally beautiful expression.

Truthseeker

[AnonymousAngel]

MashaAllah.... nice words goes directly to the heart & Soul

Jazaki Allah for this & reward u with all good InshaAllah

thx for sharing

FiAmanAllah

[AzeriBahar]

Originally Posted by Muslima99

Never give up


In the lowest low
When friends become foe
When your heart becomes alone
No calls on your phone

when you try and always lose
And you struggle but cannot choose
To give up or countinue your strive
To accomplish your goal in life

Remember your dream never fall
Back it up and stay tall
Never give up your hope decision
Always aside your vision

Live your dream
At the end it shall gleam
Things to you never seem
shall at the end seem

by Muslima99

thank you sister.what can i say for your poem?masha ALLAH.wallahi ALLAH -TAALA blessed you with great talent for poetry.you have got a great talent for poetry.keep writting sister and making us happy with your poems ok?
ws
sis Bahar

[youngmuslima]

salam dear sis muslima
really so wonderfuuuuuuuuuul
may allah bless you
khaoula
ws

[Muslima99]

Thank your very much for your enourmous support.

I hope to always be upto your expectations

[Hot ice]

thans alot my sis in god

[Muhammad Ali]

good!



Fe-Amaan Allah

[Saiba]

Asslam-O-Alikum
Dear Muslima it is a so beautiful, I believe he same, Masha ALLAH, keep writing, you have the talent to come up with wonderful topics,
Take care,
FiammanALLAH